Kurado

Name: Kurado (last name unknown)

Age: 17

Height: 6'0"

Abilities: Quincy style Bow and Arrow

Custom Abilities: Custom Bow and Arrow using powerfully charged arrows that are charged with a negative energy, making the power greater, as well as the price.
Strange ability to make self appear as a Shinigami with the cloths of one, as well as his bow taking the form of a Zanpaktou with ONLY the appearance.

Class: Quincy

Likes: Reading, Knowledge, Power, Acknowledgment, manipulating people

Dislikes: Any Shinigami stupid enough to fight him.

Special Characteristics: Presence usually provides worry to Shinigami due to his large record of killing them.

Personality: Usually a pretty happy person, caring to those in need, however completely hostile to any kind of threat, usually Shinigami, and will assault with deadly force on any that try to attack.

Looks:

History: Kurado grew up most of his life in a very small town secluded from the rest of the world. because of this, the town was very poor and hostile to little brats like him. The only thing that made his life worth living, were his parents who were strong Quincys. from the early age of 8, he was trained to be a Quincy, and stop the Hollows from their path of destruction. It was strange the sense of justice the small boy had, because despite the way he was treated around town, he saved them from countless hollow attacks. He became very powerful by the time he was 13, as his town was attacked by at least 10 hollows a day because of its distance from the world, making it an easy target for them supposedly, and he was the only one that could stop them, as his parents only had the ability to train. The day came when his parents, as well as he were to die. about 5 Shinigami, two being lieutenants, came to the small house of theirs. They entered the house and slaughtered the two parents quickly. Kurado entered the room just in time to see this happen. when he was noticed by the Shinigami, they slowly made their way to kill him. Pushed by rage, Kurado assaulted them with his bow and arrow, and in one shot, destroyed them all along with the house. It was after this day, that he began to hate Shinigami for what they did. Instead of applauding his parents for teaching him to protect his town from the hollows, they were killed. he ran from that place, and has been hunted down ever since because of his power. However any Shinigami they send after him, always end up dead. even a captain has been slain in attempts to stop him.

Everything looks fine except your special ability thats deals with the shingami. Thats not really a special ability, all you can say is you stole a shinigami outfit, and carry a regular katana around to act like its your zanpaktou.

I'd also like you to describe that negative energy alittle more, like what 'exactly' is it and how do you use it.

Once these are fixed I'll approve.